Seeking feedback

Soliciting reviews and comments:
I’ve just now, just finished the second chapter of my book, and am seeking people’s insights as to whether it MAKES SENSE.
Obviously, welcoming comments.
One won’t understand the second chapter without first reading the first.
Link to first chapter: DONE – A better life
Link to second chapter: DRAFT – Two worlds, two ways of life

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